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Module 34

Unslop: the final pass should usually be small

The final pass removes machine-shaped prose and needless cognitive load with the smallest effective edits, without silently rewriting the author.

Part VII · 1 min read

On this page 4 sections
  1. Mark protected elements before editing
  2. Make the smallest effective edit
  3. AI-writing signals worth removing
  4. End with one question

Mark protected elements before editing

Before you edit, mark these as protected unless the task explicitly allows change:

Changing "I" to "we", "may" to "will", or "₹50 lakh" to "a large amount" is not stylistic improvement. It changes the document.

Make the smallest effective edit

Prefer edits like these:

Do not rewrite a paragraph wholesale because you can produce a smoother paragraph.

AI-writing signals worth removing

Common signals include:

The goal is not to make AI detection tools happy. The goal is to remove patterns that make the writing less precise or less recognisably yours.

End with one question

After the pass, ask:

What still feels harder to read than the idea itself requires?

Then fix only that.